Monday, 10 February 2014

Draft Feedback from Ms Abrahamson

What went well-

  • Creative image on front with mirror.
  • The minimalist design works (but shrink price/issue/barcode).
  • Adheres to Music Magazine Conventions.


Even better if-

  • Page 4 on contents says ones to watch but it is page 4.
  • Is con-tents designed following a style influence?
  • Image is rather conservative. Is this the look you want?
  • DPS layout is symmetrical and neat; shadows on images need removing.
  • Article is appropriate in style but needs a stronger ending and details of where to get hold of 'Bills's tracks/ Twitter feed etc.
  • DPS needs page numbers and Phon branding.
Level 3

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