- A better image is needed
- A good idea- needs a bit of work though
- You need to justify these size choices
- Needs work
Contents
- A better image is needed
- A nice idea
- Something is missing though
- We need to talk this idea through
Double page spread
- Images again
- This will be the fold of the page
- Page numbers
- More text needed
Overall
- A great house style
- We'll talk about the next steps
- Level 2 top/level 3 low
- A very good draft
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